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Old 11-18-2010, 07:06 PM
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Default My landing page\

Just almost copy the way that taught, I made a landing page as following for the iq quiz, please feel free to provide feed back, I really need it. Million thanks

http://ppvlander.info/beatkobe

But if you are Laker's fans.....you may not like it lol

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Old 11-19-2010, 06:15 PM
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I think you may need to work on the English a little bit. "Kobe Lose" does not make much sense. Maybe something shocking like "Kobe is a Loser" (which he is not) would get peoples attention
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Old 11-20-2010, 03:57 PM
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I get a 403 error on that page whne I click your link.
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Old 11-20-2010, 06:37 PM
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Originally Posted by cpvcoach View Post
I get a 403 error on that page whne I click your link.
you mean the
http://ppvlander.info/beatkobe ?
or the link in the landing page?


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Needs some work... Things needs to be reworded, need some more graphic design experience...
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Try and simplify your design a little bit. Maybe put the image of Kobe inside the circular element ad eliminate the square. Try yellow/gold text against a deeper purple background, and use a narrow outline around the text.

Should make it easier on the eyes.
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Your LP needs to SHOCK the user and grab their attention. This LP would not get a very good CTR, but it's a good start. Using a picture like this would be way better:
http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:A...ITKDFiA6Zi&t=1
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